I hadn't seen this door before; it wasn't there last night...
as Molly woke up she faced the mysterious, wooden, planked door. She walked to the door and looked at it. After a while it opened all by its self... all of a sudden, it sucked her right in! Molly opened her eyes and found her self on the ground
Good openers - remember your capital letters though!
ReplyDeleteCan you think of a better word for walked?