Monday 29 June 2015

The honted house and the mistery the diseping door by sofia and cheneil

I hadn't seen the door before; it wasn't there last night. When I was getting ready for bed ,I axedentely tripet over a misterios key, when I got up there rite infront me there was a pitch black door with a scul . If im correct it looked like a deth sing from a movie I sore last year . I couldent stand but to try to open the door with the key that I triped over. So when I tried to open the door it pulled me in. There I was standing on pourch of a honted castle .

1 comment:

  1. Some good word choices e.g. accidently and mysterious. Be careful with your spelling though and check to see if you need any commas.
    Miss Gardiner

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