Showing posts with label literacy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label literacy. Show all posts

Wednesday, 15 April 2015

Go with the flow



Relaxing as usual, in the crystal clear ocean , with her adventures friends Dave and Daisy.Dripppy felt a sudden heat wave which came over her like a quilt covering you when you get into bed. Slowly, she began to drift up into a vastpuffy cloud-she was evaporating!
"Its happening again guys, get prepared!" 

Cautiously, she squeezed through the tight spaces of the cloud, she began to wait for her friends.She saw them coming the fun had began!

"whohooo!" Drippy squealed  

She then felt a sudden tickle up her spine like a spider crawling on your face when your asleep. She altered back into the water, to find she was becoming a droplet! Drippy was condensing.The cloud she was in grew bigger and blacker, until finally she fell slowly onto the hard concrete ground.  she  tried to pick her delicate self up. More droplets joined her including her friends(Daisy and Dave),they just had 1 more stage to go.

Drippy and her friends fell on to a mountain, she then realised that she was going on her OWN water slide. How cool is that? She then came back to her usual spot waiting with her bubbly friends.
"when will the next one come again drippy?" said Dave and daisy
"It will come soon, it will go on and on, it is a water cycle, I can not wait!" exclaimed Drippy.


The next few days came and that time had come it was cycle time!


by Brogan

Drippy the Droplet

Relaxing as usual , in the crystal clear, tranquil sea with her adventurous  friends (Floppy  and Dave) Drippy felt a sudden heat wave come over her, as the  raging  hot sun beamed down on her "It's happening again guys; get prepared!" Floppy exclaimed, expressionless.

Drippy raised up transforming into water vapour, this could also be called evaporation- when the sun turns water into vapour. "Up  and away," shouted Dave excitedly as he began to lift up into the sky.  

Cautiously she squeezed through the  spaces of the puffy white cloud trying to find her friends. Suddenly she felt a chill trickle down her spine like a spider creeping across your hand slowly she began altering back into a  water droplet - Drippy was condensing. As the cloud grew blacker and heavier and more droplets joined forces with them. Drippy instantly grabbed hold of Floppy and Dave hand-they knew at any moment they could precipitate. Although Drippy is used to the water cycle every time a thrilling feeling fills her heart  Drippys heart rapidly beats like as drum out of her chest! A tingle of trepidation trickles down her spine it was happening - she was precipitating.

Exploding out of the cloud drippy darted to the hard ground at exhilarating speed.
"WHOOOHOO!" screamed Dave with excitement ran down the snowy mountain.
As soon as she got down drippy drifted off with her friends.

By Janice            

Wednesday, 18 March 2015

drip,drop...

Relaxing as usual, in the transparent, tranquil ocean with her curious friends (Splosh and Splash) Drippy was waiting for her next adventure. The raging sun was beaming down on the crystal clear sea all of a sudden a heat wave over came drippy she was transforming her into water vapour-she was evaporating. He felt a tingle slide down his slithery back like a spider climbing over your hot hand! "here it comes" shrieked splosh expressionless. Rapidly, she felt a queasy feeling floating through her belly-it was time! An overwhelming sensation travelled through Drippy's  body she new what extravagant journey was awaiting her in the air.

As they rose they cautiously squeezed  through tight puffy, fluffy ball of cotton wool ;it was a cloud. Seconds later she began altering back into a water droplet whilst connecting with the other droplets to make one big tight feeling. Drippy was condensing as the cloud grew darker and heavier to get ready to precipitate but drippy was not looking forward she was missing her droplet family. Although drippy is used to the water cycle an unforgettable feeling runs down her body. A tingle of trepidation trickled down her spine (she was precipitating!)

Exploding out of the cloud drippy darted onto the hard mountain at an exhilarating speed! "Whooooo!" screamed drippy with her fast tightening. Second later drippy ran down the mountain it was sensational like when you slide along a puddle of sharp ice. Suddeny, splashed back into the ocean wondering how exited her family will be to hear her exiting journey that made her heart pound like a drum out of her chest!



splash the water droplet



 Relaxing as usual in the tranquil sea, Splash was chilling out with her loving friends[Dizzy and Dave ]- all of a sudden, Splash and her friends felt as hot as ever. She knew what was happening because it has happened before to her. " Don't worry, I know that you aren't used to it but it won't hurt you!" exclaimed Splash. They were evaporating from the water and Splash couldn't see her friends anywhere.


Now they were performing a cloud and Splash could feel her friends calm hands coiling together as they got pushed together.

blue the droplets crazy adventure

Chilling, in the light blue tranquil sea, drippy swam over to her two friends (floppy and Dave) when she felt something extraordinary happen to her, her body slowly lifted off of the blue ocean  she realised she was turning to water vapour  "this is the part when I evaporate" she said to her two friends. Next she felt herself going into a cloud with her water droplet friends they all gathered together this is called condensation they all started to snow this is called precipitation

Splashy the water droplet.

                           
Relaxing in the cool, warm tranquil water with her friends (drippy and droppy) Splashy was enjoying her day. Suddenly, a sweltering heat wave hit her. The raging sun was smiling at her." Its happening again!" exclaimed Drippy and Droppy enthusiastically. Splashy was evaporating! As she was flying high in the air, Splashy searched for her friends.


  A queasy feeling ran through her body as she attached to a cloud. She scurried across the big, puffy cloud. She could feel her self transform into a rain drop again. Filled with fear, Splashy grab hold of Drippy and Droppy's hand. Even though Splashy went through all the stages of the water cycle everyday, she could   







Relaxing as usual in the translucent ocean, splish and splosh - the two best, friends that could finish each others sentences- felt the sudden heat rush come through while they were enjoying the vast amount of water. They weren't surprised. It was something they experienced now and again. In the laziest voice ever, splosh,
Drip, Drop..

Relaxing through all the entertainment- while they still could! The shining sun reflects onto the ocean, people swimming in delight  Trying not to be confused what's going to change by being  transformed over and over again, (This is called the water life cycle!). Enjoying the shimmering clouds above us waiting, when will it be our turn? Drippy, who was terrified whispered, "I.. I hear something.. I think it's.. going to start any moment now..". Droppy, who was Drippys friend, was separated once by the water cycle, it was an unpleasant surprised but

DRIP DROP

Drip the droplet was swimming in the deep blue and the sun was shing suudingly he was going up "help help help help help" he yelled as he driftid away "help me" he was avaprting  he sloly became a

Like always, splashy was swimming in the outstanding, blue sea with his friends : Drippy and Droppy  (they were waiting for it to happen again). Due to the heat they new it would happen any time soon. Because it was warm,   they rose up in the air while turning into water va 

water cycle

 
Water bathing with his cool splashy friends, Dave the water droplet(suddenly) realised that he felt like he was in a oven at 360c."Here we go again" commented Dave. Rising with no expressions on Dave's face, relaxed like he has just been resurrected. With cool feelings in Dave guts, Dave transformed in to a enormous bubble, nearly as soft as a kitten. Dav      

Drippy's Adventure

As the sun rose up and shimmered on the crystal, clear, tranquil sea, Drippy woke up with amazement.
"When will the water cycle happen-again?" asked Drippy boastfully.
"Soon; be ready when it does,"replied her mother(Daisy)trying to calm Drippy down.
A little while later, Drippy suddenly felt the  ragging, hot, heat beam down on her like a furious fire. Without warning, Drippy gracefully lift up into the air like a majestic phoenix as she turned into water vapour. She was evaporating!



Wednesday, 12 November 2014

Word Classes

Today we have been learning about word classes!
 
We have recorded a poem to remind us what the words mean.
 


Every name is called a NOUN,
As field and fountain, street and town;

In place of noun the PRONOUN stands

As he and she can clap their hands;

The ADJECTIVE describes a thing,

As magic wand and bridal ring;

The VERB means action, something done -

To read, to write, to jump, to run;

How things are done, the ADVERBS tell,

As quickly, slowly, badly, well;

The PREPOSITION shows relation,

As in the street, or at the station;

CONJUNCTIONS join, in many ways,

Sentences, words, or phrase and phrase;

The INTERJECTION cries out, 'Hark!

I need an exclamation mark!'

 
Can you write some of your own examples of these word classes in the comments box?