Wednesday 18 March 2015

blue the droplets crazy adventure

Chilling, in the light blue tranquil sea, drippy swam over to her two friends (floppy and Dave) when she felt something extraordinary happen to her, her body slowly lifted off of the blue ocean  she realised she was turning to water vapour  "this is the part when I evaporate" she said to her two friends. Next she felt herself going into a cloud with her water droplet friends they all gathered together this is called condensation they all started to snow this is called precipitation

1 comment:

  1. A good start but where is the rest?

    I really like your first sentence!
    You need to check the rest for capital letters, full stops and other punctuation.

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