As the sun rose up and shimmered on the crystal, clear, tranquil sea, Drippy woke up with amazement.
"When will the water cycle happen-again?" asked Drippy boastfully.
"Soon; be ready when it does,"replied her mother(Daisy)trying to calm Drippy down.
A little while later, Drippy suddenly felt the ragging, hot, heat beam down on her like a furious fire. Without warning, Drippy gracefully lift up into the air like a majestic phoenix as she turned into water vapour. She was evaporating!
Joanne, you did a very good piece of writing today! Well done! I really like your vocabulary choices and your use of punctuation.
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