Water bathing with his cool splashy friends, Dave the water droplet(suddenly) realised that he felt like he was in a oven at 360c."Here we go again" commented Dave. Rising with no expressions on Dave's face, relaxed like he has just been resurrected. With cool feelings in Dave guts, Dave transformed in to a enormous bubble, nearly as soft as a kitten. Dav
Messiah, you've tried really hard today with your sentence openers, Just make sure your are reading it through to check it makes sense.
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