Brogan and Ashantis space story

                                                    The future...


One morning, Jenson Smith was walking along the path, when everything rose up! It started by a simple bottle cap then it led to a gate rising, it seemed like everything Jenson walked past it floated up! However, Jenson didn't notice everything was raising, he was only going round the corner to the shop-before work. He was only gone less than 5 minutes everything was normal until he came out his house that's when  everything started floating (but he still did not notice)...


Cautiously, Jenson turned around and he could finally see everything floating! In a blink of an eye, shops started floating. In addition to the shops HOUSES even started floating in the air!As time went on, objects started disappearing into the sky everything completely demolished, nothing was left, no sound no "beeps" from the cars or the sounds of people shouting.It.Was.All.Gone.Before very long Jenson started floating but where had he gone?


He had gone to space! The houses were up there-on the moon! Everyone's possessions were up there everyone was up there, they was having a good time. Is this what the future will be like?


It was from then on that's  how the future world was, but when will the future be?

SATs revision

                                                       GRAMMAR

A  noun is a name, place of thing, so it needs a capital letter. But don't forget a month and day need a capital letter too!

A verb is a doing or being word for example running,jummping, splashing.

An article is used to show say a specific thing like the box, which is talking about a specific thing not a box which is any kind of box. e.g., A ,an and the

A adjective is describes a noun for example the bright light, the wet water, green grass. ( which you can see on the first line)

A adverb describes a verb (which you can see on the second line) e.g.. slowly, swiftly, quietly.

A proper noun, which is a different way to use a noun e.g. , Emily , Amanda ,Thalia

A pronoun is a different way to use a proper noun, e.g., he she they you me him her ; and most importantly it most people forget it so MAKE SURE YOU REMEMBER!

Go with the flow

Relaxing as usual, in the crystal clear ocean , with her adventures friends Dave and Daisy.Dripppy felt a sudden heat wave which came over her like a quilt covering you when you get into bed. Slowly, she began to drift up into a vastpuffy cloud-she was evaporating!
"Its happening again guys, get prepared!" 

Cautiously, she squeezed through the tight spaces of the cloud, she began to wait for her friends.She saw them coming the fun had began!

"whohooo!" Drippy squealed  

She then felt a sudden tickle up her spine like a spider crawling on your face when your asleep. She altered back into the water, to find she was becoming a droplet! Drippy was condensing.The cloud she was in grew bigger and blacker, until finally she fell slowly onto the hard concrete ground.  she  tried to pick her delicate self up. More droplets joined her including her friends(Daisy and Dave),they just had 1 more stage to go.

Drippy and her friends fell on to a mountain, she then realised that she was going on her OWN water slide. How cool is that? She then came back to her usual spot waiting with her bubbly friends.
"when will the next one come again drippy?" said Dave and daisy
"It will come soon, it will go on and on, it is a water cycle, I can not wait!" exclaimed Drippy.


The next few days came and that time had come it was cycle time!


by Brogan

Brogan's letter

                                                                                                      Heroic Discount Stores
                                                                                                      456 Greek  way
                                                                                                          Athens, Greece
To whom it may concern,

                                           I was wondering if you could supply me with your discounted items? I am going to be taking 12 tasks, which the king gave me! They are challenging but some are easy like: killing a lion, getting the scarf from the queen and killing the snake, which has three heads. But the most challenging one is to kill the dear with the golden anthers!

As you know, heroes like me need tools so I came to the best supplies store in the whole of Greece! I need: a razor sharp dagger, to kill the lion; killer snake poison, or a metre long piece of rope for choking the 10 headed hydra to kill the snake; a metal round shield; a pop up little tent(so I can pop it up when I am traveling around)and finally I need fast acting traps to capture animals. If you have  noticed I will not be needing anything for the queen, because all I need is my charm-I heard she already likes me!


Even though it is a lot to ask, I need YOUR help, if you are willing to give me these products here is my address- 52 Greek road. As soon as you get this contact me strait the way, as I will know you considered it. Although  I have asked for a lot, can I have a heroic white tunic gown so I look more heroic!


Thank you
                  yours sincerely Hercueles