Wednesday, 18 March 2015

Splashy the water droplet.

                           
Relaxing in the cool, warm tranquil water with her friends (drippy and droppy) Splashy was enjoying her day. Suddenly, a sweltering heat wave hit her. The raging sun was smiling at her." Its happening again!" exclaimed Drippy and Droppy enthusiastically. Splashy was evaporating! As she was flying high in the air, Splashy searched for her friends.


  A queasy feeling ran through her body as she attached to a cloud. She scurried across the big, puffy cloud. She could feel her self transform into a rain drop again. Filled with fear, Splashy grab hold of Drippy and Droppy's hand. Even though Splashy went through all the stages of the water cycle everyday, she could   



1 comment:

  1. A great start - you've tried hard to include a range of punctuation.

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