One day a man called Dan was walking to work. All of a sudden the manhole he stepped on flung him as high as a skyscraper and when he hit the ground he didn't die. "I have super powers!" he shouted. As he looked around everything was floating up. He grabbed a newspaper as it floated past. It said a Alien space ship disabled the Earths gravity. Then he heard a voice it said "put your hand out and make a ship to go in to space to save the Earth " the voice said . He put his hand out and a ship called the USS enterprise appeared. "Wow!" said Dan
When he got inside the ship was on auto pilot, the ship warped to mars.
James - this is a great start to your story! I like your simile and some of your vocabulary choices e.g. disabled
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