Monday 29 June 2015

Death Tunnels by Demarci and JaydenJ

They hadn't seen the door before last night, so they crept through. Through the door I saw a big heavy titanium door. I knock 4 times , when I opened the door it was like a time portal which sent me to  a room with four doors "well that's a coincidence ,four knocks four doors ,said the 9 boys   as soon as the nine boys crept into the tunnel closer and closer they could see light but a javelin landed right in  front of the exit .The boy`s crept out just missing another javelin   as soon as the boy`s crept out the Celts gather around the nine boys   

1 comment:

  1. Some good complex sentences boys. Be careful with your punctuation and capital letters though!
    Miss Gardiner

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