One ordinary day there was a man that's life changed in a space of a few minutes , as he was walking through the streets , objects started to lose gravity . The man did not notice anything until he stopped , he turned around and saw all the floating objects , he didn't know what to do but as he closed his eyes he got lifted up . The man thought he will die because he couldn't breath but in amazement he could .is this a dream ? he thought . So he had to think of a plan to get back to planet earth . It was a hard time thinking but he thought of one . His plan was to find a space village as he thought they existed .After a few hours of looking he actually found one but it didn't look like one it was really hidden it was inside a circular rock that was really big , he entered it and inside he found a large amount of people or some aliens . Although they looked suspicious he talked to them .
Surprisingly they understood him and talked back . Their language was not so good but it was ok . He explained that he needed some parts to build a ship to lift off back to earth . They actually agreed , but on one condition , he has to get them a special shining rock from a cave . The man had only one choice , to accept it . It was only because he needed to get back to earth . So they explained where the cave was , and gave him a pickaxe . In a blink of an eye he was gone . so he found that special rock , so he collected it and returned all happy and excited . As the alien people promised , they gave him all the parts he needed for the rocket.
So he started building , it took longer then the expected but he finished .Statistically he should make it . He quickly sprinted to the people and said thank you to them . He rushed back to the rocket and prepared himself to lift-off . He had all he needed fuel , a suit and more . He knew he was prepared the rocket was ready . So this was the time , before he went in he said a last goodbye . The countdown began 3! 2! 1! LIFTOFF . It was along journey back but he made it and because of floating he landed safely . Now he knew that he's special , with a power of losing gravity . But now he knew how to control it , he needed to use his mind . If he thought of something positive gravity was normal and if he thought of something negative everything around him loses gravity . Now he lives happily with his family . And he will forever [At least he thinks he will]
A well written story, Kacper - I really like your ideas, particularly your mysterious ending! Can you think of a simile that you could add into your story?
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