I hadn't seen the door before; it wasn't there last night.It was next to the old dragon. I was scared of that dragon because it was so big. The door was broken in small pieces. Then, the dragon wake up and I saw some of scary dragon's. I was so scared to get out of my bag. Next, I went out of my bag. The big dragon came to me scared me because accident i throw rock at him.
Good use of conjunctions, Ahmad. Maybe you could start some of your sentences with adverbs or verbs?
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