Thursday 4 June 2015

Gravity by Ben









                                                                                   Gravity


On an ordinary Tuesday, a man called Bob, was walking like normal to work but something was not right, objects starting to float up into the sky: buildings, fences and cars.Suddenly, the ordinary man  flew in sky as well. Rushing Bob runned ( as fast as a lion chasing their prey ) straight his house to check on his wife and kid but he could only go so far by flying. The man was thinking is this real? Is this in my head? If this is real how is it happing? The cars went into space and landed on the moon. Then the houses went into space and stayed there.   


All of a sudden the sky turned grey and thunder bolts made a giant bang! After the bang everything was white and I found I was in my bed and it was all a horrible nightmare         

1 comment:

  1. Well done, Ben! I really like your simile and use of questions.
    (Remember it's 'ran' not 'runned')

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