Alberts amazing rescue
One day there lived a man who didn't know what he was capable of, this man was called Albert. Albert had the possibility to make things float and loose gravity. After weeks of looking for a job Albert finally had a interview this person interviewing Albert this person also had magical ability's too but he knew it but couldn't control it. At the interview he thought he was getting interviewed to be working at a shop but it turns out he was getting interviewed to be selling balloons.
A week later Albert started to notice his powers and so did his boss he got fired for making a child float then popping her balloon. Although he did get his pay.
THE SCIENEST CRAZY IDEA
On Monday 4th June Albert passed a middle school he looked at it suddenly somehow when Albert tilted his head the building tilted Albert got creative and started to do yoga apparently Albert got suspicious curious and nosy. In a blink of an eye he was there he noticed there was a scientist and he knew his plan was to steal parts of mars to make mars bars but never knew mars isn't in a mars bar. It the crazy person was right behind him eating a mars bar and when he saw him reading
I'm not sure you have planned your story Talexia - a lot of unrelated things seem to be happened in your story. Make sure you have a clear beginning, middle (problem) and ending to your story.
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