Wednesday 15 April 2015

Kianna's letter

                                                                   Heroic Discount supplies

                                                                     744 Olympian Way

                                                                              Athens

                                                                              Greece 







Dear sir/madame,
                            I am writing to you to ask you for some supplies, because I broke a promise and  killed my dear family because of this, the king has gave me not one but twelve tasks to complete. Due to this I need some supplies to help me on my travels and I can trust this store to give me  useful equipment that will not brake. I know that my first challenge is to defeat the furious lion its risky and I don't want to brag, but I'm pretty strong so I think that I can murder the hairy lion.


I would like the following items: a sword, dagger and armour all of this is what I will need for the hypha but I will need more that for the other mishens

                                    

2 comments:

  1. A good try Kianna. Well done for using a colon!

    Try to describe the items that you need - be as specific as you can!

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  2. Well done, I like your first paragraph and well done for using a colon Helen

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