Helen and Chardonnay's
                      Grammar Guidance
           

 A noun is a name, thing, place or a person e.g

Nouns:

Car    

London
cake
letter

                             

A verb is a doing or a being word e.g

skipping

walking

dancing             

is

has
had
was


An adverb is describing a verb e.g
cautiously
quickly
slowly
speedily




A pronoun is a different word for a person e.g
he
they
she
her

A preposition is a name of a place where someone or something is e.g
under
over
above

Go with the flow

Relaxing as usual, in the crystal clear ocean , with her adventures friends Dave and Daisy.Dripppy felt a sudden heat wave which came over her like a quilt covering you when you get into bed. Slowly, she began to drift up into a vastpuffy cloud-she was evaporating!
"Its happening again guys, get prepared!" 

Cautiously, she squeezed through the tight spaces of the cloud, she began to wait for her friends.She saw them coming the fun had began!

"whohooo!" Drippy squealed  

She then felt a sudden tickle up her spine like a spider crawling on your face when your asleep. She altered back into the water, to find she was becoming a droplet! Drippy was condensing.The cloud she was in grew bigger and blacker, until finally she fell slowly onto the hard concrete ground.  she  tried to pick her delicate self up. More droplets joined her including her friends(Daisy and Dave),they just had 1 more stage to go.

Drippy and her friends fell on to a mountain, she then realised that she was going on her OWN water slide. How cool is that? She then came back to her usual spot waiting with her bubbly friends.
"when will the next one come again drippy?" said Dave and daisy
"It will come soon, it will go on and on, it is a water cycle, I can not wait!" exclaimed Drippy.


The next few days came and that time had come it was cycle time!


by Brogan

Drippy the Droplet

Relaxing as usual , in the crystal clear, tranquil sea with her adventurous  friends (Floppy  and Dave) Drippy felt a sudden heat wave come over her, as the  raging  hot sun beamed down on her "It's happening again guys; get prepared!" Floppy exclaimed, expressionless.

Drippy raised up transforming into water vapour, this could also be called evaporation- when the sun turns water into vapour. "Up  and away," shouted Dave excitedly as he began to lift up into the sky.  

Cautiously she squeezed through the  spaces of the puffy white cloud trying to find her friends. Suddenly she felt a chill trickle down her spine like a spider creeping across your hand slowly she began altering back into a  water droplet - Drippy was condensing. As the cloud grew blacker and heavier and more droplets joined forces with them. Drippy instantly grabbed hold of Floppy and Dave hand-they knew at any moment they could precipitate. Although Drippy is used to the water cycle every time a thrilling feeling fills her heart  Drippys heart rapidly beats like as drum out of her chest! A tingle of trepidation trickles down her spine it was happening - she was precipitating.

Exploding out of the cloud drippy darted to the hard ground at exhilarating speed.
"WHOOOHOO!" screamed Dave with excitement ran down the snowy mountain.
As soon as she got down drippy drifted off with her friends.

By Janice            

Helen's letter

                                                                 Heroic discount store 65 Olympian way, Athens Greece le2 Hm11

To whom I may be writing to ,


I am writing to ask if I could have some supplies. As an incredible hero, I find it very hard to get these supplies.(as I am always traveling new places) I have got to do not 1 but 12 quests, so I would really like your help. Luckily, I know some of these deadly dangers. If I could have your assistants for these tasks, I would really like it.


You might be wondering why I have to do these tasks, it is because I have be asked by the king.
I might need most of your things in your store such as; a poisoned slice of meat to poison the beastly lion, a 10 metred rope to choke the hydra, a  poisoned bow and arrow to shoot at the boar, when I find out what else I need, I will get in touch.


I am  going to be very grateful if you send these things to me in the next 24 hours. Thank you for your assistants please send me a letter back if you have any concerns, I am going to thank you again, please send these things to ma as soon as possible.


                                   Yours sincerely, heroic hero number 1.

                                    

Kaitlyn's letter

                                                                                                           Heroic discount street
                                                                                                74 Olympian way
                                                                                                Greece, Athens
                                                                                                LE2 HM4




To whom I am writing to,


I am writing to you to ask you if you will give me these following things. I need a lot of things to complete these death - defying tasks that I have been given. As you know, I am a very busy hero so I have been given some of these following tasks. I have been given not 1, but 12 tasks so I will need you to help me gather up this equipment for my long journey.


I`ll need: a razor sharp dagger for chopping the horrible lion`s head; a 2 metered rope for tying the heads of the 10-headed hydra; a knife for dreadfully cutting the glistening golden antlers of the amazing deer; a poisonous bow and arrow to kill the dreadful boar that lives among the highest mountains; and a white robe to wear to make me look even more heroic than I already do.




                                                  your sincerely,

Messiah's letter

LE26TY

66 hero supplies

Greece, Athens

Dear manager of the supply store,

I am writing to you to ask you about objects which your currently selling I am going to need for a very important quest . I have been set these incredible tasks. 

I have been challenged to do 12 tasks. Can you believe it? I can't. The first object that I have been hunting for is a raiser sharp sword like it's my prey - I just cant wait to hold one. You might of been guessing I've never held a sword before (please don't tell anybody.) I'm  a beginners class maybe you could help me. I also need a robe to strangle a 10 headed snake. if you have any armour I would be delighted to receive it. (I need it asp         



Sharneys letter

                                              Heroic discount store
                                              543 Olympian way
                                              Greece, anther
                                              AN2 6PQ


To whom it may concern,
                                   I am writing to you to request for certain items that I will be hoping to receive for my heroic journey. Hopefully, your store will be able to for fill my expectations as no other store has! Can you make this happen?


As you already know a muscular hero (like me) has to accomplish several quests for the king he has gave me not one but twelve tasks to complete-this will be a life risking, breath taking journey and I need your help! Obviously, I will need many supplies such as: a razor sharp dagger to  assassinate the a specific lion; an invisibility cloak to rapidly sneak upon the three headed dog and drag him  unknowingly; a bow and arrow full of poison to shoot the deer and receive its golden antlers and complete another challenge; and finally a two meter long rope to choke the hydra and achieve victory!


Although I am Heracles, the great I still need your assistance .I hope I have not caused you any trouble-I really appreciate your help!


                                                    Many thanks Heracles the greatest!